Dusvidaaniyaan||Mulakaat||The Love Poem


Today… …I met Sulagna Again.. …In these eight years.. …she has grown a little fat… ..but has become more beautiful… ….rest all are same … ..that smile.. …that craziness.. ..and those mischieves… …meeting her felt like… …like I have found a long lost dear friend of mine.. ..but.. ….I don’t have the same relationship with her to tell her.. …couldn’t tell her today also.. ..coz she’s getting married.. …and she already loves someone… …or may be… .. I was scared of losing my friendship… ..Anyways.. …Doesn’t seem like we shall meet again… …Seems like.. ..this.. ….will be the last page of this diary… ..Still.. …I hope and pray that.. …that no mater wherever she is… …She is Happy… …Goodbye Sulagna.. ..Goodbye!!!

5 thoughts on “Dusvidaaniyaan||Mulakaat||The Love Poem

  1. The lines are good. But a bit of voice modulation would have been better. Sadness expressed in the words couldn't find the way to the viewers heart, the way of narration made it like a story being narrated to a new audience.
    Improvement in the particular scene would surely mean adding a bit more grief in the actor's voice that felt missing.
    The background score is good. But a few lines lightly in the background by a playback on theme of goodbyes will surely be much more appealing. The last 10 secs or so without any narration feels empty, add a playback singer.
    Just spotting some loose ends doesn't mean the concept itself is broken, it's just that a bit more effort and enjoy the rewards.
    God bless.

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